I looked at the poems/pieces I wrote while in Pakistan and found these. Can either of them be moulded into a classical shape? (PS I showed them to Martin via his comments section - so you can check his comments on them via his blog.
1.
Grey trees spider the grey skyline
Mr Mehmood’s cell phone battery is fading.
He speaks quickly in 3 languages
2.
A bird whistles an evening chorus.
The rope bed sighs as I shift a limb.
Somewhere in UK it is raining.

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