Hi guys - been a while since I uploaded, apologies. Been working on a collection from which I've drawn the below as a 'homework' response. Loosely based along the lines of image (peach) setting (vanishing point) and conflict (maternal) so I can get some feedback for your good selves. Thanks for any reads and comments.
Till the next sess
Ax
I must split myself in two
like the flesh of a ripe peach
scored with a small sharp
fruit knife
then twisted to reveal
the gnarled hard heart
it’s the pits
I reach forward and fetch back
gathering my mothers towards me
stretching the line of my horizons
to vanishing point
both hold me
in their own image
but I smashed the mirror
and reshaped the mould
into a something of
my own devising
manmade
but nature
grown

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